So, for the first time, and definitely not the last, may I invite you to vote on peoples' art as it is worth. Not on what your petty rivalries dictate. Little more pulling out the greys in your forefront glass and slight desaturation and would be perfect.
Nice idea hit out of the park. As the light is coming through the window showing a shadow on the back of the hand so the ball should be darker on the hand side? There looks to me like more shattered glass than the size of the hole it has made?