The storm
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LUX
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night switch better and light beam is good,the window lighting not to credible
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LordP
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WhisperingSage
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The red light on top is not correct. The cabin lights between the salon and flying bridge is not lit up.
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Simba
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tilakraj
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Ligden
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HoboKing
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vicspa
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Tawiskaro
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Apart from the foggy band to the right of the sternmost window, this is excellent.
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WhisperingSage
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Red and green sidelights visible from a distance of at least two miles away—or if less than 39.4 feet (12 meters) long, at least one mile away—on a dark, clear night. An all-round white light or both a masthead light.
Lynnettel
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Okay I will try to make some changes. Thank you all very much for the help:-)
Ligden
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The start of the beam of the headlight is too far from the light source and there are annoying black areas around the guardrail in front of the lighted area, otherwise the stormy sky is quite well done.
LUX
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more like early dusk or dawn,needs more nighting imho
Tawiskaro
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Love the mood here.
Tawiskaro
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One other complaint. What looks like the silhouette of a rope or something hanging to the left of the prow is actually part of the bow. It needs a line or fill or something.
WhisperingSage
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The boat does not have the proper navigation lighting.
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Lynnettel
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Votes: 9

Current Score: 60.132

Score: 60.132

Ratio: 1.000

Cmts.: 10

Views: 248

Uploaded on: 26th Jan 2019

Updated on: 27th Jan 2019

Favourite of: 0 Citizens

Placed: 2nd


Prize won: 62

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ENTRY DESCRIPTION
remade the light beam closer to headlight, added a curves layer to make it darker, fixed the side of the boat that was missing, and tried to darkened the guard rails, I couldn't figure out the proper navigational lightening
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